Here is the link to my final(!) elevator pitch:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qSqUTMGJauM
Reflection
Once again, I only received positive feedback from my last elevator pitch, including that I was enthusiastic and knew what my product was and worked hard to sell it to the viewers. With such feedback, I worked to made sure I kept the same enthusiasm and poise in my third one as I did the other two. I hope it is up to par with the others!
Hey there Laura! I can tell by this third time you're super confident in your lines and material, and you look so much more comfortable saying them. Your facial expressions work good with the words and ideas you're trying to convey as well. You know what they say, third time's the charm!
ReplyDeleteHi Laura, what stuck out to me with your elevator pitch is how you introduced your product. I think you did a great job with turning a problem most mascara users have learned to put up with into a problem that can [and should!!!] be solved ASAP! I literally felt a wave of relief wash over me when you introduced your product, and I already knew what it was.
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